My areas to improve page…






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why did you select this piece of work?
I chose this piece of work because I consider this is one of the works I should improve.

what aspects could you improve?
Writing in my own words.

what skills, knowledge or attitudes do you need to develop in order to improve this piece of work?

Thinker:; I have to think of better ways of writing stories.

what steps would you take to achieve this pourpuse?
Trying to be a thinker.